Narrative

This is my narrative from Term 2. I have recorded it so I can hear how it sounds (actually, James- who has a cold recorded it).

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_s_TIPRAC44clVzdDhkbFA1RzQ/view?usp=sharing

One day their was a boy call Tonga he came from Tonga. He was a tall boy with big eyes and a small mouth. On the next day at tonga he was at the mountain running.People could feel the ground shaking, they didn’t know there was a volcano eruption.

on the next day in the morning After seconds a big volcano eruption happened. all the people stopped and ran to a far place where the volcano cant come to. Black smoke was coming out.

After two days people from tonga woke up all they see is and magical land. It had lolly trees, grass and rocks. there was lots of lollies on the trees. kids at tonga wanted to get them.

on the next day all the ash went away and people went to the new land and got the lollies. after hours people started to build house and make shops for new people that comes to tonga. Tonga helped out to build the house. the new land was full of people.